What was wrong with this?
- Still a little too long
- Audio overlapping worked but was a little unclear with the background sound of the titles
- Camera was a little shaky at times and the audience could notice the stabilisation effect at for example, [0.54] where the sky is a little flashy.
- dialogue was a little low volume and background music yet again overpowered dialogue at times
- around [2:11] you can hear a little laughter (low level) from the background where the two henchmen walk away. - This isn't a big problem as acting is not key but helps make the film come across better.
- [2:33] the boss doesn't have his hat on, [2:35] he does. This was not noticed by a class of around 20 but was later noticed by me when analysing myself.
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