What was wrong with this?
- The opening was too long to be marked (4:07)
- Their was no distribution company title (all MOB Gangster films included this and not so not including this made the film opening unconventional.
- opening did not include any credits for the director's, etc.
- Audio overlapping did not work at times i.e. while on the phone
- film opening was all in daylight and unconventional as I initially planned for it to be low level lighting
- background music overpowered the dialogue at times
- At times, the opening lacked continuity which was a huge problem. (only about 2 cuts where like this).
- Cut out dialogue from the boss did not make sense as a lot of previous dialogue had been cut out.
- Blood from gun shot at the end looked somehow unrealistic but wasn't a major problem
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