Fourth and final Draft

What was wrong with this?

• Too many production/distribution titles i.e. produced by two different companys
• Still titles go too fast
• still title font and colour font don't go with the rest of the opening
• You can hear the annoying noises of the camera being moved around
• Camera is unsteady and the stabilisation effect has created a weird effect where the screen is wobbling. 
• background sound is too high i.e. you can hear the sounds of the birds which is unconventional and shows the boss and his family to be weak. 

This draft is the best so far but it would be a waste to throw away the initial film so I will further experiment on attaching the two together to create one. 

- All my ideas cannot be written down but basically, I am planning to fade from the two henchmen taking the snitch to the boss, to zooming out of the snitches face from the initial film. This will then fade from the slap to a point of view shot of the snitch getting the talk from the boss and later being shot by the bosses main man. As the gun goes up, I am planning to add the gun shot title and edit the titles so it displays the director(s) on the bullet and the film title 'SOLO BUSINESS' as the title which gets blown away. I am also planning to keep the distribution and production company title at the beginning (the city CGI). 

*UPDATE* 

I have managed to attach both together and have cut out a lot in order to keep the film just below three minutes.   

I will be using this as my final piece and have received positive feedback from this opening.